An Untold Story
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 32; the thirty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton
. The theme for the month is 'An Untold Story'
“Oh yeah…c’mon…” he grunted again. Sweat glistening on his
bare back making it almost shine in the harsh summer sunlight. The room had no
curtains & let the sun stream in. She observed the dust particles twinkling
in that ray of light which softly touched his shoulders. She could see the
muscles on his arms harden, his biceps bulging out invitingly. She touched them
softly & murmured “go slow...” He looked deep into her eyes “Don’t worry I will...”
his voice was husky, almost breathless & she loved the music in it. She
looked on as he moved, rhythmically, every movement of his, every soft grunt
making her more aware of herself, of her desires.
“There, almost done…you do know how to operate that cylinder
right? Anything else you need, just knock on my door…” Sahil, her new neighbour
smiled as he left her apartment. She’d moved in yesterday & had no gas
connection yet. Being a Samaritan, Sahil had immediately offered his spare one
& managed to roll it all the way from his kitchen to hers.
She looked at his door & sighed. Her fantasy, she hoped
would not just remain an untold story.
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Comments
All the Best for BAT 32 :)
Regards,
Megha :)
Thanks Meghna & I'd always be there to welcome you back :)
Thanks Amit, maybe I should copyright this eh? :P
Thanks Prateek :)
Anyways no problem...
short and crisp story..liked it :)
ATB for BAT
I really love those people who spread happiness around .. keep spreading .. :)
and then you surprised the reader with the Trolled paragraph, I can see a beginning of a good story in this incomplete story.
ALL the best
@odzzy thanks for the encouragement & I sure will spread happiness as long as i can
@Deepa thanks so much! :)
@The Madrasi i left the story's ending to the reader's imagination...:P
ATB for BAT :)
good job!
ATB for BAT! :)
Nice work..
ATB for BAT!
please do read my entry: http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/2012/10/love-torn.html
Someone is Special
was great. I do not know who you are but definitely you are going
to a famous blogger if you are not already ;) Cheers!
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